Saturday, 27 August 2011

Amazing Descriptions

This week we have been learning how to write a good description using strong verbs, great adjectives and a sprinkling of similes. We looked out our classroom window and wrote a literacy description of what we could see. We shared our writing and recorded it. Here are some we thought were fantastic. (Once loaded click refresh if the audio player does not play the first time)
 
Image attributed to  Yiannis Logiotatides


Image attributed to Simon Tong

 Out the Window by Brooke (mp3)







2 comments:

Cathe said...

YEA!! Congratulations Liana!! I'm so proud of you. Keep up the good work and you will go far. Love from Cathe in Upstate NY of the USA!

Mrs Shepherd said...

Fantabulous Girls. I got to listen to both of you now. First go the audio would not play. Will play your work to 6B tomorrow.